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I think part of the difficulty with the sentence can be corrected by emphasizing the problem being reported: Using the print functionality after doing a search in the Web Product Provider (...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T01:10:10Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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System
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2019-12-08T01:10:10Z (almost 5 years ago)
I think part of the difficulty with the sentence can be corrected by emphasizing the problem being reported: > Using the print functionality after doing a search in the Web Product Provider (specifically, attempting to print the Individual Provider Map) results in the wrong listing being printed. Parenthetical statements are not considered ideal; when they can reduce clutter in the core of the sentence, I find them useful.
#1: Imported from external source
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2011-02-04T18:30:38Z (almost 14 years ago)
Original score: 2