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Simply choose another adjective: I drove past the empty stables and the deserted servant's quarters, and after another quarter mile I entered a very large circular driveway. Or break up the s...
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2020-01-03T20:41:49Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T05:20:16Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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2019-12-08T05:20:16Z (about 5 years ago)
Simply choose another adjective: > I drove past the empty stables and the deserted servant's quarters, and after another quarter mile I entered a very large circular driveway. Or break up the sentence so that you can group them together. > Both the stables and the servant's quaters were empty as I drove by. After another quarter mile I entered a very large circular driveway.
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2016-06-16T05:18:55Z (over 8 years ago)
Original score: 4