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Q&A Advice on portraying my protagonist's anger without making her insufferable

Dialogue and monologue. Dialogue with her friends, one by one, until they leave. With a bartender or barista. On a chat room or a BBS. Monologue could be writing in a diary or a blog. Or potenti...

posted 8y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#4: Attribution notice removed by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-13T12:00:37Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T05:23:18Z (almost 5 years ago)
Dialogue and monologue.

Dialogue with her friends, one by one, until they leave. With a bartender or barista. On a chat room or a BBS.

Monologue could be writing in a diary or a blog. Or potentially she monologues at her cat, who will look interested only until she's fed.

Whoever the audience is, have the character say out loud the things she's thinking and feeling, with occasional asides of things she's thinking and feeling that she doesn't want to admit out loud.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2016-06-28T21:27:42Z (over 8 years ago)
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