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I am trying to describe a process. There are two players in the scenario. Player A tries to find player B. If player A finds player B, then player A tags player B. Something like that. Here is an...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T05:24:13Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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hebbo
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2019-12-08T05:24:13Z (about 5 years ago)
I am trying to describe a process. There are two players in the scenario. Player A tries to find player B. If player A finds player B, then player A tags player B. Something like that. Here is an example: > A fox tries to find a rabbit that is sleeping, and when it finds one it eats it. Now, I know what each "it" refers to. But how can I rewrite the sentence so it would not sound confusing? Also, what is the rule when there are two things (fox and rabbit)in the sentence? Sorry for my naive question, I am very new to this.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2016-07-07T21:46:34Z (over 8 years ago)
Original score: 11