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Q&A Is starting a story with dialogue bad?

As you say, there are many stories that work that start with dialogue. Far too much advice about writing is much too mechanical in nature. Dialogue is just a mechanism for telling a story. Rules ab...

posted 8y ago by Mark Baker‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#2: Initial revision by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T05:25:06Z (almost 5 years ago)
As you say, there are many stories that work that start with dialogue. Far too much advice about writing is much too mechanical in nature. Dialogue is just a mechanism for telling a story. Rules about which mechanism to use are silly, and usually easy to prove false with counter-examples.

What a story must do is to establish conflict. Can you do that with dialogue? Of course you can.

But note that conflict does not mean violence. Nor does it mean confrontation or argument. Conflict, in story terms, means desire and obstacles to that desire. Bullets whizzing by heads are not exciting or gripping until we care about whose head they are whizzing by and understand what desire drove them to the place in which bullets are apt to whizz by heads.

Desire and obstacle are what you need to establish. Dialog is as good a tool as any for doing it.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2016-07-13T05:38:55Z (over 8 years ago)
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