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Q&A Pitfalls for writing a talkative character?

Get everything out in the first draft. Let him ramble on all you like. Put the first draft aside for a month or so. Go back and re-read, and be absolutely ruthless in your culling when re-reading ...

posted 8y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T05:26:28Z (almost 5 years ago)
Get everything out in the first draft. Let him ramble on all you like.

Put the first draft aside for a month or so. Go back and re-read, and be absolutely ruthless in your culling when re-reading his rambling.

If you still can't tell if he's talking too much, hand the ms off to a good beta reader with the explicit instruction that you need to know if/when Mr. Motormouth is overtaking the narrative.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2016-07-20T09:42:45Z (over 8 years ago)
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