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Your description has to be about the setup — the 5% that isn't about the discovery. Or maybe the first 10%, after the initial discovery which gets your protagonist over the threshold of the adventu...
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#4: Attribution notice removed
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System
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2019-12-13T12:00:37Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T05:26:33Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/23907 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
Your description has to be about the setup — the 5% that isn't about the discovery. Or maybe the first 10%, after the initial discovery which gets your protagonist over the threshold of the adventure. The rest will have to be vague puffery about the wonders of discovery, adventure, fantasy, thrills and chills, etc.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2016-07-22T00:53:36Z (over 8 years ago)
Original score: 3