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In my novel, the protagonist starts out as a runaway slave, and I want to point out to the reader that she is avoiding those who are in charge of slaves who all wear a uniform involving a blue shir...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T05:30:19Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Gladiator Kittens
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2019-12-08T05:30:19Z (almost 5 years ago)
In my novel, the protagonist starts out as a runaway slave, and I want to point out to the reader that she is avoiding those who are in charge of slaves who all wear a uniform involving a blue shirt and brown leather jacket. I have her travel through a busy crowd, and I want to show her being paranoid whenever she sees the colour blue. However, I do not know where it would be sensible to describe the uniform of these men. Do I include it where the characters are first introduced (which is currently in a flashback to the MC's childhood)? Or would it make more sense to include the description later when they are being spotted by someone due to the distinctiveness of the uniform?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2016-08-18T22:15:35Z (about 8 years ago)
Original score: 1