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I love this approach, don't change it! I once read a mystery book with an approach similar to yours, it ended on a cliffhanger but was nevertheless, satisfying. Try describing him like "the adjec...
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System
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2019-12-08T05:31:45Z (almost 5 years ago)
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Dreamer
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2019-12-08T05:31:45Z (almost 5 years ago)
I love this approach, don't change it! I once read a mystery book with an approach similar to yours, it ended on a cliffhanger but was nevertheless, satisfying. Try describing him like "the _adjective_ figure" such as "the brooding figure". Pretend you're at the scene where the character is in and you don't know his name. How would you describe him? I hoped this helped!
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System
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2016-08-25T22:11:53Z (about 8 years ago)
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