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As long as you make sure the POV transitions are smooth and clearly let the reader know that the POV has changed, (Have you had any trouble with that?) I think it will make for an interesting, intr...
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System
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2019-12-08T05:32:06Z (about 5 years ago)
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Numi
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2019-12-08T05:32:06Z (about 5 years ago)
As long as you make sure the POV transitions are smooth and clearly let the reader know that the POV has changed, (Have you had any trouble with that?) I think it will make for an interesting, intricate read. Since you seem to have it planned out in so much detail as well, I think you should go for it, and having "too many POVs and elements" really depends on the opinion of who's reading- no author's book can be suited to the taste of every reader. Good luck!
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System
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2016-08-28T00:57:29Z (over 8 years ago)
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