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In the story I am writing, the main character is not in control of the events of the story, I did this to create a strong sense of powerlessness, but I have found a problem. I am having difficultie...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T05:38:43Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/24813 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Uncle Tres
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2019-12-08T05:38:43Z (almost 5 years ago)
In the story I am writing, the main character is not in control of the events of the story, I did this to create a strong sense of powerlessness, but I have found a problem. I am having difficulties introducing the plot points in ways that feel real, every way I have of introducing new plot points only seems to feel forced. How can I introduce plot points to a non-spearhead character, without it feeling forced? (In the unlikely event that it matters, the protagonist is a young underage soldier fighting for a guerrilla rebellion)
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2016-10-01T12:01:20Z (about 8 years ago)
Original score: 2