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Q&A Have a tough time figuring out third-person prose

I can write first-person great, but many stories can only be told third-person and i dont have much experience here. It always feels clunky, doesn't flow right. And get distracted by pronouns and w...

4 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Altoban‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T05:40:26Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/24919
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Altoban‭ · 2019-12-08T05:40:26Z (almost 5 years ago)
I can write first-person great, but many stories can only be told third-person and i dont have much experience here. It always feels clunky, doesn't flow right. And get distracted by pronouns and what is a private thought of the character and what is just descriptive of the situation. I cant really find my voice in 3rd person, how should i fix that?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2016-10-13T00:34:41Z (about 8 years ago)
Original score: 1