How to make a mimicking character believable
In my novel, there is a antagonistic character named Numbers who reacts in a similar manner to those he is talking to, even freakishly so. Because of this he is easily able to become a powerful character, but I am worried if his sudden personality changes (or rather lack of a personality) will make all of his actions feel forced. How can I solve this?
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I think that one of the important things about a character like this is that there has to be some kind of consistency. You can have the wild mood-swings depending on who he is interacting with, but I think there needs to be some kind of base-line, something which tells (or even just hints) that this character has some standard of behavior.
It's an interesting idea, but it begs the question - "What happens when he is not around other people?" If I understand the character correctly, he consistently imitates anyone he is interacting with. The problem that occurs with this is that when he's NOT around other people, he has to behave in some way, even if it's sitting in a chair, staring at the wall.
Even if the audience never sees him by himself, or doesn't see much of him at all, you as the author should have a good idea of how he behaves in many different situations. In this way, you have a greater understanding of him, and this will inform you about why he behaves the way he does.
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Don't make it a person. The best example is The Raven who only says "Nevermore."
This is very clearly a very intelligent being and yet his lexicon is limited to not only one word but a "kind of a number of nothing" word at that.
So in the madness of the human mind...
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Whatever you decide the reason is for Numbers to take on others' personalities, you have to explain it to the reader in a way which makes sense.
- Your character could have Giovannini Mirror Syndrome, exaggerated for the House, MD episode "Mirror Mirror." If your story is set in modern times, someone would have to diagnose the character (or take a stab at it) to let the audience know that the character is doing this for a narrative reason and it's not bad writing.
- Numbers could be a sociopath who sort of wants to get along with people, but he never really learned how, so all he does is mimic whoever is in front of him because "well, that person is doing it, so it must be 'correct.' "
- If you're writing a fantasy, he could be possessed by spirits/demons/etc.
Regardless of the tack you choose, you must show the reader why Numbers behaves the way he does. The characters around him should notice that he seems to have no core personality, and should point out that it's not normal. They should wonder to each other why he's like this. If any of your story is from his point of view, revealing his thoughts and perceptions might also help the reader understand why he's acting this way.
The other characters might try to fix him, depending on the setting and their proclivities. In a fantasy, that might mean "lifting a curse" or "performing an exorcism." In a modern setting, it would be a hospital conversation. This also opens a window into his behavior, allowing you to justify it for the reader.
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