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Your best bet in this scenario will simply be to prevent the reader from forming any false impressions. You can do this by correcting him immediately after the word. She saw another girl, abou...
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2019-12-12T17:49:01Z (over 4 years ago)
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2019-12-08T05:42:56Z (over 4 years ago)
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Your best bet in this scenario will simply be to prevent the reader from forming any false impressions. You can do this by correcting him immediately after the word. > She saw another girl, about fifteen years old. You can use either girl or woman; be sure to use the word that you would use to describe the viewer.
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2016-11-03T04:23:17Z (over 7 years ago)
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