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For example, what's the difference between: She closed her eyes and thought about her life. He was so confident and handsome women circled him like vultures. And this: Closing her ey...
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System
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2019-12-08T05:48:49Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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alex
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2019-12-08T05:48:49Z (about 5 years ago)
For example, what's the difference between: > She closed her eyes and thought about her life. > > He was so confident and handsome women circled him like vultures. And this: > Closing her eyes, she thought about her life. > > Being so confident and handsome, women circled him like vultures. Mainly, what effect they cause in the reader? When to use the former and when to use the latter?
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System
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2016-12-20T14:45:11Z (about 8 years ago)
Original score: 4