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Q&A Is it bad storytelling to have things happen by complete chance?

Most of the time, it's important that the outcome — good or bad — follow from the main character's actions. If the outcome is determined by chance or randomness or coincidence, it's less likely to ...

posted 8y ago by Dale Hartley Emery‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Dale Hartley Emery‭ · 2019-12-08T06:01:24Z (almost 5 years ago)
Most of the time, it's important that the outcome — good or bad — follow from the main character's actions. If the outcome is determined by chance or randomness or coincidence, it's less likely to feel satisfying.

On the other hand, a certain amount of coincidence is fine if it complicates the main character's problems. But even there, an abundance of chance can make the story feel arbitrary. (Sometimes you can make arbitrariness work, if the character's response to the arbitrariness illustrates something coherent about the character.)

My general rule of thumb: **Coincidence can make things worse for the main character, but never better.**

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2017-01-30T00:36:27Z (almost 8 years ago)
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