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Q&A Are rhymes bad in prose?

They are the good in lyrics and poems, but what about prose? An example from my own writing: I fall to the ceramic floor, blood and bile dripping from my lips, my stomach full but my muscles...

3 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by alex‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T06:06:03Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/26668
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar alex‭ · 2019-12-08T06:06:03Z (almost 5 years ago)
They are the good in lyrics and poems, but what about prose?

An example from my own writing:

> I fall to the ceramic floor, blood and bile dripping from my lips, my stomach full but my muscles lacking the slightest drop of energy. But that's all right. I don't have to move. I don't have to do anything. Because I'm happy. Because Kazuo and I will be one from now on. We will be **together**.
> 
> Wholly. **Forever**.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2017-02-11T09:46:47Z (almost 8 years ago)
Original score: 4