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We hate those things that keep us from the things we love. If a character hates being a member of a wealthy family, it is because that family, or its wealth, or its responsibilities, keep them from...
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2020-01-03T20:41:52Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T06:08:27Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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System
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2019-12-08T06:08:27Z (almost 5 years ago)
We hate those things that keep us from the things we love. If a character hates being a member of a wealthy family, it is because that family, or its wealth, or its responsibilities, keep them from something they love, or harms the thing they love. To write hatred simply as hatred, therefore, is never convincing. You have to start with love, and the thing that keeps that character from the things they love, or that harms the things they love. Then their hate makes sense. We have to save the old dance hall/beach/donut shop/park from the evil developer who turns out (shock twist!) to be the heroine's father. Cue the dance number!
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-05-29T13:25:22Z (over 7 years ago)
Original score: 6