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I've written several scenes and reread them silently. Most times they sound rushed, unnatural and uncomfortable. This especially happens with action or other fast-paced scenes. How do I avoid this ...
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System
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2019-12-08T06:22:29Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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K. Bailey
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2019-12-08T06:22:29Z (almost 5 years ago)
I've written several scenes and reread them silently. Most times they sound rushed, unnatural and uncomfortable. This especially happens with action or other fast-paced scenes. How do I avoid this happening so that the scene develops naturally and doesn't feel like everything is happening too fast? Are there any tips?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-04-22T23:50:29Z (over 7 years ago)
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