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Q&A Is stating the feeling in the action that describes it a sign of bad writing?

This is a bit hard to explain so here's are are two examples: She let out a sigh of relief. He arched an amused eyebrow. My theory is this: you only need to directly state the emotion wh...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by alex‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Question creative-writing
#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T06:26:48Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/27975
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar alex‭ · 2019-12-08T06:26:48Z (almost 5 years ago)
This is a bit hard to explain so here's are are two examples:

> She let out a sigh of **relief**.
> 
> He arched an **amused** eyebrow.

My theory is this: you only need to directly state the emotion when the action doesn't describe if well or clear enough.

Maybe I'm wrong?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2017-05-09T15:46:36Z (over 7 years ago)
Original score: 4