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Example: I shook my head unbelieving. Could someone I barely knew know so much about me? No, impossible. Could someone I barely knew know so much about me? The first example uses externa...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T06:29:28Z (about 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/28153 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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alex
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2019-12-08T06:29:28Z (about 5 years ago)
Example: > **I shook my head unbelieving.** Could someone I barely knew know so much about me? > > **No, impossible.** Could someone I barely knew know so much about me? The first example uses external body language and the second internal monologue. Does the latter make more sense in first-person narration? Why or why not?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-05-19T08:21:58Z (over 7 years ago)
Original score: 4