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Q&A "just telling the tale" - does this work?

I know (I think) many stories that have a point they want to present to the audience. However, I wanted to focus on the excitement of the adventure first. The result always seems to devolve into a...

1 answer  ·  posted 7y ago by user16973‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T06:32:19Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/28318
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar user16973‭ · 2019-12-08T06:32:19Z (almost 5 years ago)
I know (I think) many stories that have a point they want to present to the audience.

However, I wanted to focus on the excitement of the adventure first. The result always seems to devolve into a dry style as though reading a manual. On the other hand, focusing too much on "proving a point" comes off more as preaching to the audience, and ends up muddying the story.

Should I be aiming for a happy middle ground between the two, or is it possible to write a satisfying story that revolves around the characters rather than, say, a moral?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2017-05-28T04:53:49Z (over 7 years ago)
Original score: 3