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I've been writing for a while now, and everyday I feel I'm getting more serious about it. But the quality of my fiction stories are straightforward and blah. I notice I'm not using enough descript...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T06:33:04Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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A.N.M
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2019-12-08T06:33:04Z (almost 5 years ago)
I've been writing for a while now, and everyday I feel I'm getting more serious about it. But the quality of my fiction stories are straightforward and blah. I notice I'm not using enough descriptive words and even when in trying to it never turns out. Like here is an example. **What I wish mine was:**"His legs felt like cooked noodles. If he ran one more step he would collapse to the floor." **What mine is:**"His legs felt awful. If he ran he be using up the last bit of strength." **Q** - _How can I write with descriptive words that really put the reader in the protagonists shoes?_ Thanks. -A.N.M.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-06-01T10:13:11Z (over 7 years ago)
Original score: 2