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I'm very confused about tenses. I am not sure if I am mixing modifiers up or slipping from past to present. Can someone help me please, here are a few examples: Stooping, he lit a fire, warming hi...
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System
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2019-12-08T06:33:44Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Llongo
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2019-12-08T06:33:44Z (almost 5 years ago)
I'm very confused about tenses. I am not sure if I am mixing modifiers up or slipping from past to present. Can someone help me please, here are a few examples: Stooping, he lit a fire, warming himself as he swigged from a bottle. He flexed his fingers above the flames, glancing at her uneasy expression. He swung himself up as she reached for the bottle, elbowing her in the chest, palming a coin and holding it out to her. Thank you so much
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-06-02T08:19:10Z (over 7 years ago)
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