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I think, the worst way to introduce a new character is starting by detailed description of her/his background and motives before the character starts acting. She was and old kind woman. Her five ...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T01:19:20Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Nerevar
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2019-12-08T01:19:20Z (about 5 years ago)
I think, the worst way to introduce a new character is starting by detailed description of her/his background and motives _before_ the character starts acting. - She was and old kind woman. Her five children and twelve grandchildern have trained her in patience and toleration. - A greedy and unforgiving sociopath accustomed to be always right. His father died from heart attack when he [the character] was six so he and his two sisters were grown in poverty. He is sure that his father's alleged cowardice was the root of all bad events of his childhood. - etc.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2011-03-03T16:38:02Z (almost 14 years ago)
Original score: 9