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While I agree that most of these things cannot be expected out of a first draft (instead being the valuable fruits of the revision process), reading problematic sentences aloud should be a useful t...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T06:40:18Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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CloudspotterSupine
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2019-12-08T06:40:18Z (about 5 years ago)
While I agree that most of these things cannot be expected out of a first draft (instead being the valuable fruits of the revision process), reading problematic sentences aloud should be a useful tool when trying to understand the flow of a paragraph you've written. The only other thing that always helps is a fundamental grasp of poetry. But the first draft is there for you to get all of the content on paper, rhythm and diction are less important.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-06-28T22:46:45Z (over 7 years ago)
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