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Example from my own writing: One time, I sent letters, pretending to be a god. I spent last week sending letters, pretending to be a god. The recipient of these letters was Aiko Kobayashi...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T06:41:19Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/28899 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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alex
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2019-12-08T06:41:19Z (almost 5 years ago)
Example from my own writing: One time, I sent letters, pretending to be a god. > I spent last week sending letters, pretending to be a god. > > The recipient of these letters was Aiko Kobayashi, the girl who sat six rows behind me ... I just wrote _last week_ because I felt that writing: _I sent letters, pretending to be a god_ was a bit, dunno, just didn't sound right. It this a bad writing practice? If the time frame is irrelevant, should I use _One time, I wrote ..._ instead?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-06-25T07:02:19Z (over 7 years ago)
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