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Q&A Is it better to leave out the "filters/filler" in situations like this one?

“Check this out, Daichi.” Kiyoshi waved the letter at me. “From a girl.” [I looked at it.] A rabbit sticker sealed the manila envelope. Graceful handwritten words read: To Kiyoshi. Th...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by alex‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T06:42:38Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/29020
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision by user avatar alex‭ · 2019-12-08T06:42:38Z (almost 5 years ago)
> “Check this out, Daichi.” Kiyoshi waved the letter at me. “From a girl.”
> 
> [I looked at it.] A rabbit sticker sealed the manila envelope. Graceful handwritten words read: _To Kiyoshi_.

The "filter/filler" here is _looked at it_ (not sure if this is the correct term).

Is it better to leave them out in situation like this? Why or why not?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2017-06-30T13:13:37Z (over 7 years ago)
Original score: 7