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“Check this out, Daichi.” Kiyoshi waved the letter at me. “From a girl.” [I looked at it.] A rabbit sticker sealed the manila envelope. Graceful handwritten words read: To Kiyoshi. Th...
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> “Check this out, Daichi.” Kiyoshi waved the letter at me. “From a girl.” > > [I looked at it.] A rabbit sticker sealed the manila envelope. Graceful handwritten words read: _To Kiyoshi_. The "filter/filler" here is _looked at it_ (not sure if this is the correct term). Is it better to leave them out in situation like this? Why or why not?