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“Check this out, Daichi.” Kiyoshi waved the letter at me. “From a girl.” [I looked at it.] A rabbit sticker sealed the manila envelope. Graceful handwritten words read: To Kiyoshi. Th...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T06:42:38Z (about 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/29020 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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alex
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2019-12-08T06:42:38Z (about 5 years ago)
> “Check this out, Daichi.” Kiyoshi waved the letter at me. “From a girl.” > > [I looked at it.] A rabbit sticker sealed the manila envelope. Graceful handwritten words read: _To Kiyoshi_. The "filter/filler" here is _looked at it_ (not sure if this is the correct term). Is it better to leave them out in situation like this? Why or why not?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-06-30T13:13:37Z (over 7 years ago)
Original score: 7