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Q&A How to make a character's personality trully distinguishable/memorable?

Before anything, please pardon any grammar (or other kinds of language) mistakes I might make, for English is not my mother language. I'm making a fictional world, medieval-like with a wide variet...

3 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by dsc‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T06:46:50Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/29263
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar dsc‭ · 2019-12-08T06:46:50Z (almost 5 years ago)
`Before anything, please pardon any grammar (or other kinds of language) mistakes I might make, for English is not my mother language.`

I'm making a fictional world, medieval-like with a wide variety of different kinds of magic.

So far, my main character has three companions which accompany him in his quest.

These characters' personalities differ vastly from one another, but I have been unable to truly establish that _trait_... that "_thing_" which makes a character memorable. Every time I re-read my story, they just feel like _I was defining them, instead of them defining themselves_.

How can I make it so they really _feel_ like well-defined characters? What things should I keep in mind while writing?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2017-07-17T21:31:37Z (over 7 years ago)
Original score: 9