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I find myself writing these a lot: "Thanks." She tilted her head shyly to the side. As soon as she did, her chin-length hair slid off her face, revealing the bowl-sized bruise that made her...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T06:47:09Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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alex
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2019-12-08T06:47:09Z (about 5 years ago)
I find myself writing these a lot: > "Thanks." She tilted her head shyly to the side. As soon as she did, her chin-length hair slid off her face, **revealing the bowl-sized bruise that made her tiny eye look enormous.** > > "Does it hurt?" I indicated her eyepatch tatoo with one hand, **passing her the pen drive with the other.** How to avoid them?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-07-19T10:04:21Z (over 7 years ago)
Original score: 3