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We ordered pork belly, beef liver, and lamb slices—a selection that made our tongues melt and our stomachs heat up. Rattled by a sound or shake that only Sumire had detected, she picked ...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T06:50:30Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/29526 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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alex
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2019-12-08T06:50:30Z (almost 5 years ago)
> We ordered pork belly, beef liver, and lamb slices—a selection that **made our tongues melt and our stomachs heat up.** > > Rattled by a sound or shake **that only Sumire had detected,** she picked up her phone. Are these POV violations (first-person limited)? If so, how to modify them so there isn't a violation anymore?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-08-03T06:02:09Z (over 7 years ago)
Original score: 2