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I'm not sure if this is okay, (also: we hear...) I realize that typically the sentence would say the same thing if removed but it seems to work in the midst of an action line like: Close on Bat...
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screenwriting
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T07:00:41Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/30237 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Matt
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2019-12-08T07:00:41Z (almost 5 years ago)
I'm not sure if this is okay, (also: we hear...) I realize that typically the sentence would say the same thing if removed but it seems to work in the midst of an action line like: > Close on Bathsheba's distraught face in the rain we hear another CAR DOOR OPEN. > > Over her shoulder we see Bishop Caringless standing at the window she came out of. Focused on him we hear Bathsheba scream along with a struggle. > > We then see the two men carry her to their car.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-09-15T20:18:30Z (about 7 years ago)
Original score: 1