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Q&A Would it be appropriate to end a side story as soon as a character is killed off?

I am currently writing a war story written from different perspectives on both sides of the conflict. Every primary character of the story has their own side story with a family, life, etc., yet th...

3 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by TotallyN0tABot‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T07:07:51Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/30718
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar TotallyN0tABot‭ · 2019-12-08T07:07:51Z (almost 5 years ago)
I am currently writing a war story written from different perspectives on both sides of the conflict. Every primary character of the story has their own side story with a family, life, etc., yet they never come in contact with one another directly with the exception of the war itself. I also want to put emphasis on a character's death, so to do so I was thinking of ending their specific story the moment they get blown to bloody bits by a hand grenade or something along those lines. I was planning to convey the tragedy of war within the way how the story is told in tangent with the content.

Example: Say one of the characters is called to active duty a few weeks after realizing that his child has a terminal illness. Before he leaves, he makes a promise to the child that he will return. His camp is ambushed by the opposing army a few weeks before his service is over, and he ends up a casualty after a stray bullet beheads him. The story never returns to his surviving family for the rest of the book in order to portray that he really _is_ dead.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2017-10-09T01:17:18Z (about 7 years ago)
Original score: 7