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Sometimes I have a great idea of sentence (usually for a dialogue) and it is just so nice, beautiful, epic, badass, powerful, or whatever other positive impression. However, sometimes I read it aga...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T07:08:22Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Yuuza
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2019-12-08T07:08:22Z (over 4 years ago)
Sometimes I have a great idea of sentence (usually for a dialogue) and it is just so nice, beautiful, epic, badass, powerful, or whatever other positive impression. However, sometimes I read it again in the next day(s) and it is just flat, cringey, contrived, life-less, or any other negative/neutral impression. So I don't know if I keep it (some kind of _"remember your first laugh"_ for any positive impression) or if I remove it (because the positive impression was actually momentary and I realized it's actually not that good). So what to do? Does "remember your first laugh" can also kind of be applied to this or should I trust my inner editor's impression about it when I read devoid of any of the emotions of the moment when I wrote it?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-10-10T08:00:15Z (over 6 years ago)
Original score: 25