Critical review of blog post

I wrote a blog post a long time back. For this post I chose a writing style very different from what I'd read or what I'd seen before. Some guys did criticize me and others did acknowledge me for the same. Now this is not a publicity stunt, but could you guys provide critical comments on my writing style and the content too?

Here's the post.

[EDIT] : I am a budding writer and I love to write tidbits of philosophy. Can my post be judged on the following guidelines?

• Is the flow of my words smooth? In general, is the writing style appealing, does it make you want to read the post in completion?
• I know the vocabulary may not be up to the mark, but does it make me appear inadequate with words?
• I know the starting and ending portions of any creation in writing are extremely important. Does my opening grab you? Does my ending leave an appropriate sense of resolution without being simplistic?
• Does the tone of my writing give an impression that I'm well read or am I just another budding writer off the block?

Also I'd love if you could cite text from the post that would be support your arguments.

posted about 13 years ago

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