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I am writing a novel. I'm not sure if the below sentence structure is correct. I have not used any word like said/replied/asked. He was looking at the painting. “You do not have to believe me. ...
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System
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2019-12-08T07:11:13Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Abhishek dot py
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2019-12-08T07:11:13Z (over 4 years ago)
I am writing a novel. I'm not sure if the below sentence structure is correct. I have not used any word like said/replied/asked. > He was looking at the painting. “You do not have to believe me. I will bring the guns. You will bring money. Simple.” > > He left the room once the conversation was over. In most novels, I see excessive use of "said" and asked, is my structure correct or do I have to use those words? An example from any novel would be a bonus.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-10-19T19:53:40Z (over 6 years ago)
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