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I took @Henry Taylor's advice and pruned some characters and dialog that added depth to the story but didn't move it forward. I also had a couple of unbiased third parties read it and made some cha...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T07:13:39Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/35052 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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H-Finch
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2019-12-08T07:13:39Z (over 4 years ago)
I took @Henry Taylor's advice and pruned some characters and dialog that added depth to the story but didn't move it forward. I also had a couple of unbiased third parties read it and made some changes before making a submission. Final word count was a few dozen words shy of 5000. And yeah, I won ;-)
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-04-13T10:51:15Z (about 6 years ago)
Original score: 1