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Q&A Does adding an indefinite article in this sentence hurt the flow, or does it improve clarity?

To me, it sounds fine to say "She wore a black shirt and red skirt", without the indefinite article before "red skirt". However, in "She wore a black shirt and red skirt revealing slim legs", I wo...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Tyler‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T07:17:12Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Tyler‭ · 2019-12-08T07:17:12Z (over 4 years ago)
To me, it sounds fine to say "She wore a black shirt and red skirt", without the indefinite article before "red skirt".

However, in "She wore a black shirt and red skirt revealing slim legs", I worry that the lack of an indefinite article makes it sound as though both the shirt and the skirt are revealing slim legs, rather than just the skirt. On the other hand, adding the indefinite article makes it sound a bit cumbersome.

Should I include an indefinite article?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2017-11-05T05:14:29Z (over 6 years ago)
Original score: 2