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Calling all gifted writers, would you tolerate 'modulate for' in this paragraph? "Dr. Tom wants the best for everybody who asks him for help. Despite his impressive skills and the physical interve...
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creative-writing
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System
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2019-12-08T07:19:05Z (over 4 years ago)
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johann_ka
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2019-12-08T07:19:05Z (over 4 years ago)
Calling all gifted writers, would you tolerate 'modulate for' in this paragraph? "Dr. Tom wants the best for everybody who asks him for help. Despite his impressive skills and the physical interventions, Dr. Tom is foremostly concerned with the patient’s spirit, as his work is a spiritual treatment that in turn might modulate for the patient’s healthy body and mind."
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System
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2017-11-09T04:15:23Z (over 6 years ago)
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