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I'm writing a story where my two main characters have been merged together so that they share a single body. They spend a lot of time discussing things and arguing on what actions to take. This has...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T07:19:14Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Gladiator Kittens
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2019-12-08T07:19:14Z (almost 5 years ago)
I'm writing a story where my two main characters have been merged together so that they share a single body. They spend a lot of time discussing things and arguing on what actions to take. This has resulted in some very odd sections of dialogue to write where they are communicating but they are talking to someone else at the same time. I am finding it hard to keep dialogue fresh - even when it's just them communicating - as they can't use body language with one another. I don't want to fill my novel with "thought at" since they can choose to keep some thoughts private from the other because everyone has secrets.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-11-09T14:48:52Z (about 7 years ago)
Original score: 1