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Q&A Is it redundant to repeat a subject when it's been implied in a college essay?

Redundancy in prose is often useful because people forget things and because the real world relationships implied by the grammatical relationships is not always clear. One often finds that overzea...

posted 6y ago by Mark Baker‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T07:19:46Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T07:19:46Z (over 4 years ago)
Redundancy in prose is often useful because people forget things and because the real world relationships implied by the grammatical relationships is not always clear.

One often finds that overzealous editing for brevity can do a hatchet job on clarity. Technically the meaning may have been preserved, but it becomes something of a grammatical exercise to puzzle it out. Better, sometimes, to leave the redundancy in rather than forcing the reader to go back and hunt down antecedents.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-02-10T14:42:44Z (about 6 years ago)
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