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Normally this sort of thing is easier than actually writing the piece for me but this time I can't get anywhere with the overall structure of the story: I want a character to win a great victory, ...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T07:23:03Z (about 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/31549 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Ash
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2019-12-08T07:23:03Z (about 5 years ago)
Normally this sort of thing is easier than actually writing the piece for me but this time I can't get anywhere with the overall structure of the story: I want a character to win a great victory, at great cost, a cost that comes to define his continued existence, is there a way to place such a moment within the body, rather than at the beginning of a piece such that the piece doesn't feel anticlimactic to that character moment? I've seen examples where such moments are used to end a section of a serial, such as the end of _[The Gunslinger](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Dark_Tower:_The_Gunslinger)_ but I'm kind of set on the idea of using it as a central moment in a relatively small piece. Any insights would be most welcome.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-11-20T13:16:13Z (about 7 years ago)
Original score: 3