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“One should try to invite people from this world to eternity, from sin to obedience, from greediness to asceticism, from jealousness to generosity, from duplicity to honesty, from insolence to mode...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T07:26:41Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/31728 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Ahmadi
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2019-12-08T07:26:41Z (almost 5 years ago)
“One should try to invite people from this world to eternity, from sin to obedience, from greediness to asceticism, from jealousness to generosity, from duplicity to honesty, from insolence to modesty, from negligence to awakening, and from arrogance to virtue.” Can anyone edit or correct it, please? Is the sentence logical enough in terms of grammar or not?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-11-29T10:37:17Z (almost 7 years ago)
Original score: -3