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I would write it as dialogue, but avoid (as the narrator and writer) attributing any emotions, humor, or subtlety to the character's text messages. Annie does not say things cautiously, angrily, or...
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2019-12-19T22:13:15Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T07:31:57Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
I would write it as dialogue, but avoid (as the narrator and writer) attributing any emotions, humor, or subtlety to the character's text messages. Annie does not say things cautiously, angrily, or allude to things, or skirt the subject. She does not truly understand what is going on, she is a shallow simulation. she cannot be embarrassed, or understand that some topics are embarrassing. She cannot keep a secret unless explicitly told to: She does not understand, like a human, what is a private communication and what is acceptable to reveal to others.
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2017-12-15T12:20:24Z (almost 7 years ago)
Original score: 2