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Q&A How can I establish the nature of a person/group without action?

If you are writing a screenplay, you'll have all the visual and auditory resources of film at your disposal: Ominous music, a dark palette, etcetera, which is what Star Wars uses. However, please ...

posted 7y ago by Chris Sunami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T07:32:57Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Chris Sunami‭ · 2019-12-08T07:32:56Z (almost 5 years ago)
If you are writing a screenplay, you'll have all the visual and auditory resources of film at your disposal: Ominous music, a dark palette, _etcetera_, which is what _Star Wars_ uses. However, please be aware that many of the old tropes used for "evil" are ethnocentric at best, and racist or otherwise discriminatory at worst. They can also come across as horribly cliched.

If you are writing a book or a story (despite what you may have heard), it is perfectly fine to ["tell" not show](https://writers.stackexchange.com/questions/25706/why-are-writers-so-hung-up-on-show-versus-tell):

> John James was a completely evil man.

Pretty unambiguous, right? As the author, your word is law (unless, of course, you're speaking through a first-person narrator).

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2017-12-20T18:41:57Z (almost 7 years ago)
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