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Q&A How do you use adverbs properly in fiction writing?

How do you use adverbs properly in fiction writing? In a related question, a reply states: When to use [adverbs]? When your alternative would be pretentious. There are strong nouns and verbs, ...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by elika kohen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T07:44:31Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar elika kohen‭ · 2019-12-08T07:44:31Z (almost 5 years ago)
 **How do you use adverbs properly in fiction writing?**

In a related question, [a reply states](https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/8098/29022):

> When to use [adverbs]? When your alternative would be pretentious. There are strong nouns and verbs, that pinpoint given meaning, and there are pretentious ones, that replace common expressions adding very little to the meaning but sounding smart. **_Really, "She's incredibly beautiful" is better than "She's pulchritudinous"._**

(Emphasis added.)

Obviously, this reply doesn't go into detail there - because it wasn't the question asked. But, are there actually places where adverbs shine? Can they be used effectively, or are there certain effects that they are especially good at?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-01-20T02:15:16Z (almost 7 years ago)
Original score: 6