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I don't want to straight up say that the dust/ ash was blown away, I want it to have a creepy vibe to it so it's more interesting. So is there any way to show (not tell) ashes being blown away by ...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T07:49:38Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Rat
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2019-12-08T07:49:38Z (about 5 years ago)
I don't want to straight up say that the dust/ ash was blown away, I want it to have a creepy vibe to it so it's more interesting. So is there any way to **show** (_not tell_) ashes being blown away by the wind besides "the ashes were blown away"?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-02-01T02:53:50Z (almost 7 years ago)
Original score: 3