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I'm writing a story and I need to describe the character's appearance. My character is wearing a football jersey and running on the field, so how can I describe this better? This is what I came up...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T07:50:06Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Aiden Anderson
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2019-12-08T07:50:06Z (almost 5 years ago)
I'm writing a story and I need to describe the character's appearance. My character is wearing a football jersey and running on the field, so how can I describe this better? This is what I came up with: > Aiden watched the player with number ten written boldly on his football shirt running on the football field. I need to make this better and I need ideas and help. I know it sounds ridiculous but English is not my first language and that's why I'm struggling with it. Thank you :)
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-02-02T06:59:48Z (almost 7 years ago)
Original score: 3