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You have tons of options, depending on the context and the purpose of that sentence: If we already know the scene is at a football field, then "Aiden watched Number Ten running on the field." ("F...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T07:50:09Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Ken Mohnkern
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2019-12-08T07:50:09Z (almost 5 years ago)
You have tons of options, depending on the context and the purpose of that sentence:
- If we already know the scene is at a football field, then "Aiden watched Number Ten running on the field." ("Football" is redundant.)
- If we already know the character Aiden is watching the activities at the football field, then "Number Ten ran on the field." ("Aiden watched" and "football" are redundant.)
- If Number Ten isn't part of the story, then you could even delete the whole sentence. Or "Aiden sat in the bleachers watching the game."
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-02-02T18:06:01Z (almost 7 years ago)
Original score: 2