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Three things: Let the viewpoint character look at her. Get into the guys mind and describe how he looks at her and what he thinks and feels about what he sees. How you do that will depend on wha...
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2019-12-08T07:50:30Z (almost 5 years ago)
Three things: 1. Let the viewpoint character look at her. 2. Sometimes telling is better than showing. 3. Number two were two things: effortlessness of reading and facilitation of identification.
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2018-02-03T09:45:16Z (almost 7 years ago)
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